Someone pointed out that the 1st poem sounds unfinished.... heh heh. At that point in my life I couldn't find a resolution, but now I'm resolved to either 1) Make my older poems complete or 2)discard the ones I can't fix. There's also 3) Not put them up at all AHAHAHHAHAAA
Hrumph, anyway, they're more a sign of how I'm feeling at a particular moment, so by dump-- er, communicating that feeling to y'all I feel exonerated. Thanks ;D
I think this was from Monday...
When the moon wanes
"We reflect"
Praising Diana
"See our choices, must protect"
Flailing madly
"Buh--Free!... you, you respect!"
Ending Soundly
"Mom, I crushed the tree insect"
GET IT?! Ah well, it deserves its subtlety. *goes to add stuff to the first entry
Tuesday, September 23, 2008
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